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A Junk Drawer Entry.

Fri Nov 13, 2009, 9:27 PM
Alrighty. Planned on doing some real writing tonight, but I figure I'll take a few minutes to say...something. Just try to keep this buisness going. Honestly, I write in my real journal about as often as I post something here.

To tell the truth, I really should be doing at least one of the three papers I have due next week. Two six pagers and a twelve. I don't feel like it though. It's Friday. I'm not doing homework on a Friday night for any reason ever. Eff that noise.

So I'm going to write, or at least I was before I decided to sit out on the back porch with a cigarillo and a drink for a couple minutes. Yeah, it's getting cold out, but I need those simple little pleasures in my life. Now, though, I seem to have lost my drive. Can't seem to make myself care a whole lot, though. I appear to have over-relaxed.

Oh, right, I did have something important and non-rambling to tell you guys: finally have a date set for my wedding. June 5th, 1430 in the afternoon. Now the real planning starts in earnest; I have a church booked, but everything else is still up in the air. Trying to keep costs down but still have it be neat. I'm not really so interested in having it be perfect as I am in having it be fun for everybody. It's a party dammit, and I intend to throw a good one.

I think that I've found a dress. It is bluish-teal, however, so I'm a little curious how my grandparents will react. But hey, the "white wedding" tradition started with Queen Victoria in 1840; before that brides tended to just wear their best dress, whatever color it was. And the color that it was considered the luckiest to get married in? Blue, the color of fidelity. I'm so traditional I'm nontraditional.

Alright. I'll clam up and get to work now. Hope you had a happy Veterans Day, or whatever you may be celebrating. If nothing, I hope you all had a good week.

  • Listening to: Baby monitor static
  • Reading: Eh. Nothing.
  • Watching: Just watched Glory.
  • Eating: Hopefully nothing. Need to stop.
  • Drinking: Mike's Hard Pomegranate Punch

Devious Info

  • Current Residence: Colorado Springs
  • Interests: Right now? Writing and mostly. Some reading. School when it's in session.
  • Favourite poet or writer: Uh, Poe, Tolkien, Brian Jaques, Lovecraft, Garth Nix, Graham Greene, Stephen King, Oscar Wilde
  • Favourite game: Spades. Yes, with cards. Oh, and Dnd.
  • Favourite gaming platform: Wii

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:iconexcape75:
I would like to get your input on something. It is one of a few possible endings I have thought of for my book (Renamed it to The Icarus Project).

I didn't think it would matter, as this book will likely never reach the light of day. It is just going too fast, in my mind. Open Office says I have only wrote seventeen or eighteen pages, and yet it seems like so much has happened...

Would you be interested in hearing it? (I would also have to reveal stuffs about a character so it makes sense...Would be a major spoiler, lol!)
:icontyteaux:
Certainly, but I must admit myself a bit behind on reading deviations (not just yours, everyone's). I've found myself a bit busy; besides school starting up next week, hammering out my financial aid stuff, and taking care of my daughter, I've just found out that I now need to fit physical therapy into my schedule somehow. Give me a day or so to catch up, and I will gladly hear your idea.

It's true, things often happen very quickly when one writes. Remember, though, there is always more to a story than the first draft holds. In writing my own novel, the rough draft was a little more than 16,000 words (around 64 pages) from start to finish. This time around, it's about 160 pages...so far. It's blindingly painful to do it all again of course, but in doing so one can often find out more about characters, events, and motivations than one ever dreamed to know. I've found that it's so in my case.

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"I said I knew that it was a mistake. I never said I was sorry I made it."
:iconexcape75:
I wish you best of luck, with the novel-and the pain-as well as with everything else. I need to get into the habit of writing more, I am constantly advancing my skills.

I am a but curious, what is the physical therapy for? :(
:icontyteaux:
Why thank you. The therapy is for my hands. I have medial epicondylitis (golfer's elbow)in both arms, lateral epicondylitis (tennis elbow) in both arms, and the beginnings of carpal tunnel syndrome in both hands. I've simply worn them out. I played flute and oboe for about 6 years, am an avid knitter and crotcheter, and as an English major in college, I do an awful lot of typing. My hands (wrists, elbows and forearms, really) are just shot, to put it bluntly. Right now the therapist is just hoping to resolve some of the pain and maybe stop me from getting full blown CTS.

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"I said I knew that it was a mistake. I never said I was sorry I made it."
:iconexcape75:
What exactly is CTS? It is caused from continual use of the hands/wrists, in the same motion, right? Is it just pain?
:iconexcape75:
Tyteaux, my school is going to have another short story contest next year, and I would like to know what you think about this idea.
A friend recently told me a bit about the Illuminati. I was thinking that, since America's supposed Skull and Bones Society is kinda roughly the same thing, maybe a detective starts to investigate on a murder, and at the end of the short story, finds out that both groups, and other groups like it, if I find out about any, are all controlled by a much bigger group.
:icontyteaux:
Honestly, knowing little to nothing about either group I have a hard time offering an opinion on your idea. What I will say, though, is that while it does sound like a good idea for a story, it sounds a little large in scope for a short story. I mean, it sounds good, but it sounds more like the plot to a novel. If you think you can manage to get it all into a short story without sacrificing the emotional connection between the reader and the characters, by all means run with it.

I had the same issue a few years ago. I had intended to enter a national short story/novelette contest, but found I could barely squeeze my intended story into the seventeen thousand word limit. Though I did manage to do so, the story itself came out sounding rather empty and hollow; there wasn't enough space for me to make the characters into who I knew they needed to be. I ended up never submitting it. It simply wasn't the story that it was supposed to be. Instead, I set about turning it into a novel and am still working on it to this day, nearly two years later.

Point being, yes, it does sound like a good plot. It just sounds like one that you'll have to be careful in crafting. Best of luck to you.

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"I said I knew that it was a mistake. I never said I was sorry I made it."
:iconexcape75:
Thanks, and I hope you get it published. I have trouble doing that too, and the word limit I have is 2k. I really appreciate your input, and have come to value your opinions ^.^

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